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  • Short Story » General, Teen Fiction Re: Room 53

    Thanks for reading the story, and glad you liked it! I've heard a lot of different people's responses to this story, and in all honesty, they are all over the ...

    May 31, 2013
  • Short Story » General, Teen Fiction Re: Room 53

    I agree that the flashback was not as repulsive as it could have been, although I'm afraid that putting too much emphasis on it would detract from the situation at ...

    May 31, 2013
  • Short Story » General, Teen Fiction Re: Room 53

    Thanks for the comment! :) That's one of my favorite lines too. I originally had named the piece after it, actually. "The knife held at the beating heart of our ...

    May 31, 2013
  • Short Story » General, Teen Fiction Re: Room 53

    Thanks for the reply! As for the apostrophes, thanks for pointing that out. I had difficulty with the HTML formatting (since the site's editor was not comparable with my computer ...

    May 31, 2013


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